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[Tristan Protzman <tlp220 AT lehigh.edu>]

Hi Nihar,

Thanks for the nice comments.  All suggestions have been taken as given, except:

L11-13: "...the polarization of emitted Λ hyperons, which has been
demonstrated to be correlated with the global vorticity and can be
determined through its parity violating decay, is measured. " -> "the
polarization of emitted Λ hyperons is measured that demonstrated the
global vorticity through its parity violating decay in heavy-ion
collisions."

How about "the polarization of emitted Λ hyperons, which can be determined through its parity violating decay and has been demonstrated to be correlated with the global vorticity in heavy-ion collisions, is measured."?

Cheers,

Tristan

On Thu, Apr 20, 2023 at 3:49 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Tristan and Rosi,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

L4: the quark-gluon plasma (QGP) formed in these collisions. -> "…the
quark-gluon plasma (QGP)."
L7: …whose answer will help inform models describing the… -> …whose
answer will inform the models description of the…
L9: introduce velocity gradients  -> introduce the velocity gradients
L11: To experimentally measure this vortical structure,  the… -> To
measure this vortical structure,  the…
L11-13: "...the polarization of emitted Λ hyperons, which has been
demonstrated to be correlated with the global vorticity and can be
determined through its parity violating decay, is measured. " -> "the
polarization of emitted Λ hyperons is measured that demonstrated the
global vorticity through its parity violating decay in heavy-ion
collisions."

Cheers
Nihar

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