STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Gabe,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

Title:
Ratios in Jets -> Ratios inside Jets
By STAR -> at STAR

L3: …to p+p baseline. -> … to their p+p baseline.
L6: …properties, with substantial modifications to jet -> …properties 
with substantial modifications to jet
L7:medium-induced changes to ->              medium-induced modification to
L8:LHC results indicate -> the LHC results indicate
L10:through time of flight  ->               through the time of flight
L12:for p_{T} -> for the transverse momentum p_{T}
L15: to search for  possible impacts of jet-medium interactions. ->  to 
investigate on the impacts of jet-medium interactions.

Cheers
Nihar

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