STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Dandan,

Please find my comments on your nice abstracts.

General:
In this short abstract, "J/ψ" is used 14 times; sounds awkward. Please 
avoid it.

L1: Measurements of -> Measurement of
L2: from STAR experiment -> at STAR
L7: J/ψ is an important probe -> J/ψ is one of the important probes
L9: at RHIC-STAR experiment, which indicates a strong coupling of J/ψ 
and QGP and limited regeneration effect.
-> at the STAR experiment that indicates its strong coupling with the 
medium and its limited regeneration effect.
L11-12: Beside J/ψ nulcear modification factor and J/ψ azimuthal 
anisotropy observable, the J/ψ polarization… -> Besides, the J/ψ 
polarization… [multiple time J/psi in this sentence]
"a new degree of studying QGP properties" -> not clear what is new 
degree?
L18: measurement of in a heavy-ion collision in RHIC energy
 -> measurement in heavy-ion collisions.
L20: Collins-Soper frame as well as the polarization -> Collins-Soper 
frame, and the polarization
L21: will be present -> will be reported

Cheers
Nihar


On 2023-04-19 20:09, Dandan Shen via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> This is my poster abstract.
>
> best,
> Dandan
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