STAR HardProbes PWG

[Dandan Shen <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>]

Hi Barbara, Nihar and Yi,

Thanks for your nice comments. This is the new version, please have a look:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_abs._Dandan_ver.2.pdf

Best，

Dandan

发件人：Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
发送日期：2023-04-23 18:45:40
收件人：STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

Hi Dandan,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract for the poster. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - Title: Measurements for J/psi polarization  --> Measurement of the J/psi polarization 

 - L8: A strong suppression of J/ψ and zero J/ψ v2 --> The strong suppression of J/ψ yield and consistent with zero elliptic flow (v2) of J/ψ

 - L9: "RHIC-STAR experiment" is okay, but still suggest just use "the STAR experiment" 

 - L11: Beside J/ψ nulcear (wrong spelling) modification factor and J/ψ azimuthal anisotropy observable, --> Beside nuclear modification factor and v2 observables,

 - L12: new degree --> new angle 

 - L16: could makes --> could make

 - L18: In this talk --> In this work

 - L18: the first J/ψ polarization measurement of in a heavy-ion collision in RHIC energy --> the first measurement of J/ψ polarization in heavy-ion collisions at RHIC energy. 

  - L19: Helicity frame, Collins-Soper frame --> Helicity frame and Collins-Soper frame

  - L20: in Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr --> in Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr collisions 

  - L20: will be present --> will be presented 

Cheers,

Yi