STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Dandan,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I am fine with this version. 

Cheers,

Yi

On Wed, Apr 26, 2023 at 4:04 PM Dandan Shen <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn> wrote:

Hi Barbara,

Thanks for the very nice comments, I uploaded the updated poster abstract to the link below.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_abs._Dandan_ver.3.pdf

Best,

Dandan

发件人：Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>
发送日期：2023-04-26 15:30:57
收件人：Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
抄送人：Dandan Shen <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>,Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>,STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

Hi Dandan,

I sign off with minor comments.

- L11: Beside nuclear -> Beside the nuclear

- L 17: in early stage. -> at the early stage.

- L19: you can remove "at the top RHIC energy" - you give energy in L21.

- L22: will also be discussed  -> will be discussed

Cheers,

Barbara

On Wed, Apr 26, 2023 at 7:09 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Dandan,

Thank you for addressing my comments.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2023-04-26 08:10, Dandan Shen wrote:
> Hi Barbara, Nihar and Yi,
>
> Thanks for your nice comments. This is the new version, please have a
> look:https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_abs._Dandan_ver.2.pdf
>
> Best，
> Dandan
>
> 发件人：Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> 发送日期：2023-04-23 18:45:40
> 收件人：STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> 主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark
> Matter 2023 submitted for review
>
>> Hi Dandan,
>>
>> Thanks a lot for the nice abstract for the poster. I have some minor
>> comments for your consideration.
>> - Title: Measurements for J/psi polarization  --> Measurement of
>> the J/psi polarization
>> - L8: A strong suppression of J/ψ and zero J/ψ v2 --> The strong
>> suppression of J/ψ yield and consistent with zero elliptic flow
>> (v2) of J/ψ
>> - L9: "RHIC-STAR experiment" is okay, but still suggest just use
>> "the STAR experiment"
>> - L11: Beside J/ψ nulcear (wrong spelling) modification factor and
>> J/ψ azimuthal anisotropy observable, --> Beside nuclear
>> modification factor and v2 observables,
>> - L12: new degree --> new angle
>> - L16: could makes --> could make
>> - L18: In this talk --> In this work
>> - L18: the first J/ψ polarization measurement of in a heavy-ion
>> collision in RHIC energy --> the first measurement of J/ψ
>> polarization in heavy-ion collisions at RHIC energy.
>> - L19: Helicity frame, Collins-Soper frame --> Helicity frame and
>> Collins-Soper frame
>> - L20: in Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr --> in Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr collisions
>> - L20: will be present --> will be presented
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Yi