STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Subhash,

I have last minor comments:

- L6:  hard scattering ->  hard scatterings

- L17: The inclusive jet is -> Inclusive jets are

Cheers,

Barbara

On Thu, Apr 27, 2023 at 2:31 AM subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Barbara,

Thanks for this suggestions. I have updated abstract in the same link.

With regards,
Subhah

On 2023-04-26 04:37 PM, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
> Hi Subhash,
>
> I sign off with the following minor comments:
>
> - L12: could manifest a -> can manifest as a
> - L13: D0-mesons -> D0 mesons
> - L15: soft-hard -> soft and hard
> - L 16: inclusive jets -> inclusive jet
> - L20: of jet-medium -> of the jet-medium
>
> Cheers,
> Barbara
>
> On Wed, Apr 26, 2023 at 6:44 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> wrote:
>
>> Hello Subhash,
>>
>> Thank you for addressing my comments.
>> I sign off.
>>
>> Cheers
>> Nihar
>>
>> On 2023-04-26 05:19, subhash via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>> Dear Barbara, Nihar and Yi,
>>>
>>> Thanks for the nice suggestions. I have updated the slides in the
>> same
>>> link. Please let me know if there any additional suggestions.
>>>
>>> With regards,
>>> Subhash
>>>
>>> On 2023-04-24 04:42 AM, Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>> Hi Subhash, NIhar,
>>>>
>>>> please find below my comments to your nice abstract:
>>>> - L6: observables about -> observables of
>>>> - L9: with respect to rapidity -> with respect to the beam axis
>> (?,
>>>> rapidity doesn't have direction)
>>>> - L12: manifest a -> manifest as a
>>>> - L13: flow (v1) for jets -> flow for jets
>>>> - L13: In fact, the open charm D0-meson shows -> The open charm
>> D0
>>>> mesons show
>>>> - L15: interaction between soft-hard processes. -> interplay
>> between
>>>> the soft and hard processes.
>>>>
>>>> Cheers,
>>>> Barbara
>>>>
>>>> On Sun, Apr 23, 2023 at 12:21 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l
>>>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hi Subhash and Nihar,
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks a lot for the nice abstract for the poster. I have some
>> minor
>>>>> comments for your consideration.
>>>>> -Title: I would suggest to remove "(v1)"
>>>>> - L13: remove "(v1)"
>>>>> - L14: at top-RHIC energy --> at the top-RHIC energy
>>>>> - L16: the first measurement of directed flow of inclusive jets
>>>>> --> the first measurement of inclusive jets v1
>>>>>
>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>> Yi
>>>>>
>>>>> On Thu, Apr 20, 2023 at 11:11 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
>>>>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Subhash Singha (connectsubhash AT gmail.com) has submitted a
>> material
>>>>>> for a
>>>>>> review, please have a look:
>>>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63503
>>>>>>
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