STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Subhash,

I sign off with the following minor comments:

- L12: could manifest a -> can manifest as a 

- L13: D0-mesons -> D0 mesons

- L15: soft-hard -> soft and hard

- L 16: inclusive jets -> inclusive jet

- L20: of jet-medium -> of the jet-medium

Cheers,

Barbara

On Wed, Apr 26, 2023 at 6:44 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Subhash,

Thank you for addressing my comments.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2023-04-26 05:19, subhash via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Dear Barbara, Nihar and Yi,
>
> Thanks for the nice suggestions. I have updated the slides in the same
> link. Please let me know if there any additional suggestions.
>
> With regards,
> Subhash
>
> On 2023-04-24 04:42 AM, Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l wrote:
>> Hi Subhash, NIhar,
>>
>> please find below my comments to your nice abstract:
>> - L6: observables about -> observables of
>> - L9: with respect to rapidity -> with respect to the beam axis (?,
>> rapidity doesn't have direction)
>> - L12: manifest a -> manifest as a
>> - L13: flow (v1) for jets -> flow for jets
>> - L13: In fact, the open charm D0-meson shows -> The open charm D0
>> mesons show
>> - L15: interaction between soft-hard processes. -> interplay between
>> the soft and hard processes.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Barbara
>>
>> On Sun, Apr 23, 2023 at 12:21 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>
>>> Hi Subhash and Nihar,
>>>
>>> Thanks a lot for the nice abstract for the poster. I have some minor
>>> comments for your consideration.
>>> -Title: I would suggest to remove "(v1)"
>>> - L13: remove "(v1)"
>>> - L14: at top-RHIC energy --> at the top-RHIC energy
>>> - L16: the first measurement of directed flow of inclusive jets
>>> --> the first measurement of inclusive jets v1
>>>
>>> Cheers,
>>> Yi
>>>
>>> On Thu, Apr 20, 2023 at 11:11 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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>>>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>>>
>>>> Subhash Singha (connectsubhash AT gmail.com) has submitted a material
>>>> for a
>>>> review, please have a look:
>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63503
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