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[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Barbara,

Thanks for this suggestions. I have updated abstract in the same link.

With regards,
Subhah

On 2023-04-26 04:37 PM, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
> Hi Subhash,
>
> I sign off with the following minor comments:
>
> - L12: could manifest a -> can manifest as a
> - L13: D0-mesons -> D0 mesons
> - L15: soft-hard -> soft and hard
> - L 16: inclusive jets -> inclusive jet
> - L20: of jet-medium -> of the jet-medium
>
> Cheers,
> Barbara
>
> On Wed, Apr 26, 2023 at 6:44 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> wrote:
>
> > Hello Subhash,
> >
> > Thank you for addressing my comments.
> > I sign off.
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2023-04-26 05:19, subhash via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Dear Barbara, Nihar and Yi,
> > >
> > > Thanks for the nice suggestions. I have updated the slides in the
> > same
> > > link. Please let me know if there any additional suggestions.
> > >
> > > With regards,
> > > Subhash
> > >
> > > On 2023-04-24 04:42 AM, Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > Hi Subhash, NIhar,
> > > >
> > > > please find below my comments to your nice abstract:
> > > > - L6: observables about -> observables of
> > > > - L9: with respect to rapidity -> with respect to the beam axis
> > (?,
> > > > rapidity doesn't have direction)
> > > > - L12: manifest a -> manifest as a
> > > > - L13: flow (v1) for jets -> flow for jets
> > > > - L13: In fact, the open charm D0-meson shows -> The open charm
> > D0
> > > > mesons show
> > > > - L15: interaction between soft-hard processes. -> interplay
> > between
> > > > the soft and hard processes.
> > > >
> > > > Cheers,
> > > > Barbara
> > > >
> > > > On Sun, Apr 23, 2023 at 12:21 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l
> > > > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > > >
> > > > > Hi Subhash and Nihar,
> > > > >
> > > > > Thanks a lot for the nice abstract for the poster. I have some
> > minor
> > > > > comments for your consideration.
> > > > > -Title: I would suggest to remove "(v1)"
> > > > > - L13: remove "(v1)"
> > > > > - L14: at top-RHIC energy --> at the top-RHIC energy
> > > > > - L16: the first measurement of directed flow of inclusive jets
> > > > > --> the first measurement of inclusive jets v1
> > > > >
> > > > > Cheers,
> > > > > Yi
> > > > >
> > > > > On Thu, Apr 20, 2023 at 11:11 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
> > > > > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > > > >
> > > > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Subhash Singha (connectsubhash AT gmail.com) has submitted a
> > material
> > > > > > for a
> > > > > > review, please have a look:
> > > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63503
> > > > > >
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