STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Dandan,

Thank you for addressing my comments.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2023-04-26 08:10, Dandan Shen wrote:
> Hi Barbara, Nihar and Yi,
>
> Thanks for your nice comments. This is the new version, please have a
> look:https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_abs._Dandan_ver.2.pdf
>
> Best，
> Dandan
>
> 发件人：Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> 发送日期：2023-04-23 18:45:40
> 收件人：STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> 主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark
> Matter 2023 submitted for review
>
> > Hi Dandan,
> >
> > Thanks a lot for the nice abstract for the poster. I have some minor
> > comments for your consideration.
> > - Title: Measurements for J/psi polarization  --> Measurement of
> > the J/psi polarization
> > - L8: A strong suppression of J/ψ and zero J/ψ v2 --> The strong
> > suppression of J/ψ yield and consistent with zero elliptic flow
> > (v2) of J/ψ
> > - L9: "RHIC-STAR experiment" is okay, but still suggest just use
> > "the STAR experiment"
> > - L11: Beside J/ψ nulcear (wrong spelling) modification factor and
> > J/ψ azimuthal anisotropy observable, --> Beside nuclear
> > modification factor and v2 observables,
> > - L12: new degree --> new angle
> > - L16: could makes --> could make
> > - L18: In this talk --> In this work
> > - L18: the first J/ψ polarization measurement of in a heavy-ion
> > collision in RHIC energy --> the first measurement of J/ψ
> > polarization in heavy-ion collisions at RHIC energy.
> > - L19: Helicity frame, Collins-Soper frame --> Helicity frame and
> > Collins-Soper frame
> > - L20: in Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr --> in Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr collisions
> > - L20: will be present --> will be presented
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Yi