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[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Daniel, Priyanka, Katarzyna,

thanks for the new version, I sign off.

Cheers,

Barbara

On Fri, Apr 21, 2023 at 1:34 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Priyanka, Katarzyna, and Daniel,

Thank you for addressing my comments.
I don't have any further comments. I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2023-04-20 19:17, Kikoła Daniel via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Barbara,
>
> Thank you very much for the comments. Here is the updated abstract:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/D-meson-correlations-QM2023-v3.pdf
>
> Best regards,
> Daniel
>
> --
> Daniel Kikoła
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> Warsaw University of Technology
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> On Thu, 2023-04-20 at 10:29 +0200, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
>> Hi Daniel, Priyanka, Katarzyna,
>>
>> please find below my minor comments to your nice abstract.
>> - L4: are yet unknown -> are yet not fully understood.
>> - L17: theoretical models -> theoretical model predictions
>>
>> Cheers
>> Barbara
>>
>> On Wed, Apr 19, 2023 at 6:14 PM Daniel Kikoła via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>> > Hi Nihar,
>> >
>> > Thank you very much for your comments. I modified the abstract as
>> > you
>> > suggested and here is the updated version:
>> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/D-meson-correlations-QM2023-v2.pdf
>> >
>> >
>> > Best regards,
>> > Daniel
>> >
>> > On Wed, 2023-04-19 at 18:42 +0530, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
>> > > Hello Priyanka, Katarzyna, and Daniel,
>> > >
>> > > Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
>> > > (Please include line number it helps)
>> > >
>> > > _ "In STAR" -> "at STAR"
>> > > _ "nuclear modification factor for charmed mesons" -> nuclear
>> > > modification factor of charmed mesons
>> > > _ "Yet, details of these processes are not known in sufficient
>> > > detail,.." -> "However, the complete production mechanism and the
>> > > nature
>> > > of charm-medium interaction are yet unknown." (Please make a new
>> > > sentence from here)
>> > > _ "…and new experimental results are needed to constrain the
>> > > parameters
>> > > of theoretical calculations…" -> "The new observables are needed
>> > > to
>> > > constrain the theoretical models and the transport coefficients
>> > > of
>> > > the
>> > > QGP."
>> > > _"help pin down" -> "help to pin down"
>> > > _ c quark -> charm quark
>> > > _two-particle correlations -> the two-particle correlations
>> > > _at low relative -> at the low relative
>> > > _"…thus to the interaction of charm quarks with the bulk
>> > > partons."
>> > > This
>> > > phrase sounds like dangling here.
>> > > _"…discuss implications for interactions of charm quarks with the
>> > > partonic medium." -> "discuss their implications."
>> > >
>> > > Cheers
>> > > Nihar
>> > >
>> > > On 2023-04-17 21:19, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
>> > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>> > > >
>> > > > Daniel Kikola (daniel.kikola AT pw.edu.pl) has submitted a
>> > > > material
>> > > > for a
>> > > > review, please have a look:
>> > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63403
>> > > >
>> > > > Deadline: 2023-05-01
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