STAR HardProbes PWG

[Daniel Kikoła <dkikola AT gmail.com>]

Hi Nihar,

Thank you very much for your comments. I modified the abstract as you
suggested and here is the updated version:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/D-meson-correlations-QM2023-v2.pdf


Best regards,
Daniel

On Wed, 2023-04-19 at 18:42 +0530, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hello Priyanka, Katarzyna, and Daniel,
> 
> Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
> (Please include line number it helps)
> 
> _ "In STAR" -> "at STAR"
> _ "nuclear modification factor for charmed mesons" -> nuclear 
> modification factor of charmed mesons
> _ "Yet, details of these processes are not known in sufficient 
> detail,.." -> "However, the complete production mechanism and the
> nature 
> of charm-medium interaction are yet unknown." (Please make a new 
> sentence from here)
> _ "…and new experimental results are needed to constrain the
> parameters 
> of theoretical calculations…" -> "The new observables are needed to 
> constrain the theoretical models and the transport coefficients of
> the 
> QGP."
> _"help pin down" -> "help to pin down"
> _ c quark -> charm quark
> _two-particle correlations -> the two-particle correlations
> _at low relative -> at the low relative
> _"…thus to the interaction of charm quarks with the bulk partons."
> This 
> phrase sounds like dangling here.
> _"…discuss implications for interactions of charm quarks with the 
> partonic medium." -> "discuss their implications."
> 
> Cheers
> Nihar
> 
> On 2023-04-17 21:19, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
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