STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Jakub, Brennan,

nice abstract, please find below my comments.

Title: J/Psi -> J/$\psi$ (and throughout the abstract).

in p + p = √ s = 510GeV -> in p + p at √ s = 510 GeV

"Proposed explanatory mechanisms, including multi-parton interactions ..." - I guess here you refer to the production vs multiplicity ? Is so, please make it clear. 

we present measurements of Upsilon(1S+2S+3S combined) -> we present measurements of $\Upsilon(1S+2S+3S)$

dielectron channel -> dielectron decay channel

p+p collisions -> $p$+$p$ collisions

spectra, however the main aim -> spectra. The main aim

has obtained from p+p collisions in the dielectron channel -> has obtained from p+p collisions

 

Cheers,

Barbara

On Wed, Apr 19, 2023 at 4:30 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

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