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["Ceska, Jakub" <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>]

Dear Yi,

thank you for your comments. v5 now incorporates your comments.

Best,
Jakub

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Od: Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>
Odesláno: středa 26. dubna 2023 17:47
Komu: Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>; STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Kopie: Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

 

Hi Jakub and Brennan,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I have some minor comments on it.

 - L1: allows for to --> allows us to 

 - L3 - L5: "While such probes, ... to deepen this understanding." reads a bit strange to me, I would suggest something like (just for suggestion):

 While such studies are essential, a detailed description of the quarkonium production mechanism is not yet completely understood, even for p+p collisions. Therefore, studies in p+p collisions are important to deepen this understand- ing. 

 - L2 from bottom: The presented analysis utilises the largest sample of quarkonia obtained from p+p collisions from the STAR experiment. 

Cheers,

Yi

On Wed, Apr 26, 2023 at 10:27 PM Ceska, Jakub via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Barbara,

thank you for your comment. It has been addressed in the neweset version (v4) of the abstract.

Best regards,
Jakub

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Od: Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>
Odesláno: středa 26. dubna 2023 9:25
Komu: Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>; STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
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Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

 

Hi Jakub,

I sign off with the last minor comment. 

- in 510 GeV p+p collisions -> in p+p collisions at \sqrt{s} = 510 GeV

Cheers,

Barbara

On Tue, Apr 25, 2023 at 4:03 PM Ceska, Jakub via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear all,

thank you very much for your comments to the abstract! Your comments have been addressed, the newest version of the abstract is v3.

Best regards,
Jakub

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Předmět: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jakub Ceska for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

 

Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Jakub Ceska (ceskajak AT fjfi.cvut.cz) has submitted a material for a review, 
please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63484

Deadline: 2023-05-01
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