STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Jakub and Brennan,

Thanks a lot for the merged abstract. I have some comments on v2 for your consideration. 

 - In the first paragraph, it mentions the study of properties of QGP properties using quarkonium, and the production mechanism of quarkonium is not fully understood, and then talk about measuring the multiplicity dependence of quarkonium. People might assume all these are for heavy-ion collisions. Then, in the second paragraph, it suddenly jumps to the measurements in p+p collisions. I would suggest adding some connections between the heavy-ion and p+p collisions after the first sentence of the first paragraph. 

 - Title: Measurements of .... in p+p collisions 

Cheers,

Yi

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