STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Priyanka, Katarzyna, and Daniel,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
(Please include line number it helps)

_ "In STAR" -> "at STAR"
_ "nuclear modification factor for charmed mesons" -> nuclear 
modification factor of charmed mesons
_ "Yet, details of these processes are not known in sufficient 
detail,.." -> "However, the complete production mechanism and the nature 
of charm-medium interaction are yet unknown." (Please make a new 
sentence from here)
_ "…and new experimental results are needed to constrain the parameters 
of theoretical calculations…" -> "The new observables are needed to 
constrain the theoretical models and the transport coefficients of the 
QGP."
_"help pin down" -> "help to pin down"
_ c quark -> charm quark
_two-particle correlations -> the two-particle correlations
_at low relative -> at the low relative
_"…thus to the interaction of charm quarks with the bulk partons." This 
phrase sounds like dangling here.
_"…discuss implications for interactions of charm quarks with the 
partonic medium." -> "discuss their implications."

Cheers
Nihar

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