STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Yan,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

Line1: "…important probe to the properties of the quark-gluon plasma" -> 
"…important to probe the properties of the quark-gluon plasma"
Line4: "…interplay of several effects, including dynamic dissociation 
and …"  -> "…interplay of several effects including dynamic dissociation 
and …"
(Is there any other effects that you missed to mention here? It sounds 
like there are other effects other than that listed here; what are 
those?)
Line7: "…	that of J/ψ, comparison of the suppression of J/ψ and ψ(2S) at 
RHIC can shed …" -> "…that of J/ψ.  The suppression of J/ψ and ψ(2S) 
yield at RHIC can shed light …"
LIne10: "…with 4B isobaric collisions…" -> "… by analyzing around 4 
billions isobar collisions data (…)…"


Cheers
Nihar

On 2023-04-18 12:07, wy157543--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> This is my poster abstract.
>
> best,
> Yan
>
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