STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Yan,

Thank you for addressing my comments.
I have an additional comment on your title.
with this implemented, I sign off.

Title:
"ψ(2S) production in isobaric collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV with the STAR 
experiment" -> "Measurement of ψ(2S) production in isobar collisions at 
√sNN = 200 GeV by the STAR experiment"


Cheers
Nihar



On 2023-04-20 23:55, wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> Thank you for the nice comments. This is the new version, please have a 
> look:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_poster_v2.pdf
>
> (Is there any other effects that you missed to mention here? It sounds
> like there are other effects other than that listed here; what are 
> those?)
>
> for this question, I think the dissociation, regeneration and cold
> nuclear matter effects are the main effects.
> the dissociation include static and dynamic dissociation. maybe I only
> mention the dynamic dissociation in the
> abstract, I will modify it.
>
>
> best,
> Yan
>
> > -----原始邮件-----
> > 发件人: "Nihar Sahoo" <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> > 发送时间: 2023-04-19 20:48:07 (星期三)
> > 收件人: wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn, "STAR HardProbes PWG" 
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > 抄送: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> > 主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Quark Matter 
> > 2023 submitted for review
> >
> > Hello Yan,
> >
> > Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
> >
> > Line1: "…important probe to the properties of the quark-gluon plasma" 
> > ->
> > "…important to probe the properties of the quark-gluon plasma"
> > Line4: "…interplay of several effects, including dynamic dissociation
> > and …"  -> "…interplay of several effects including dynamic 
> > dissociation
> > and …"
> > (Is there any other effects that you missed to mention here? It sounds
> > like there are other effects other than that listed here; what are
> > those?)
> > Line7: "…	that of J/ψ, comparison of the suppression of J/ψ and ψ(2S) 
> > at
> > RHIC can shed …" -> "…that of J/ψ.  The suppression of J/ψ and ψ(2S)
> > yield at RHIC can shed light …"
> > LIne10: "…with 4B isobaric collisions…" -> "… by analyzing around 4
> > billions isobar collisions data (…)…"
> >
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2023-04-18 12:07, wy157543--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Hi all,
> > >
> > > This is my poster abstract.
> > >
> > > best,
> > > Yan
> > >
> > >
> > >> -----原始邮件-----
> > >> 发件人: "webmaster--- via Star-hp-l" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > >> 发送时间: 2023-04-18 13:57:27 (星期二)
> > >> 收件人: Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> > >> 抄送:
> > >> 主题: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Quark Matter 2023
> > >> submitted for review
> > >>
> > >> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >>
> > >> Yan Wang (wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
> > >> review,
> > >> please have a look:
> > >> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63442
> > >>
> > >> Deadline: 2023-05-01
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