STAR HardProbes PWG

[wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn]

Hi Barbara,

Thank you for the nice comments. This is the new version, please have a look:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_poster_v4.pdf

Best,

Yan

-----原始邮件-----
发件人:"Barbara Trzeciak" <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>
发送时间:2023-04-24 03:23:14 (星期一)
收件人: wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn, "STAR HardProbes PWG" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
抄送: "Nihar Sahoo" <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

Hi Yan,

I sign off you nice abstract with the following comments:

- L1: Charmonium is an important to probe -> Charmonia are important probes to study

- L8: of charmonium -> of charmonia

- L11: an unique -> a unique

- L12,13:  heavy ion ->  heavy-ion

- L16: technique -> techniques

Cheers,

Barbara

On Sun, Apr 23, 2023 at 1:30 PM wy157543--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Nihar,

Thank you for the nice comments. This is the new version, please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_poster_v3.pdf

best,
Yan


> -----原始邮件-----
> 发件人: "Nihar Sahoo" <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> 发送时间: 2023-04-21 19:29:04 (星期五)
> 收件人: wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn
> 抄送: "STAR HardProbes PWG" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> 主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review
>
> Hello Yan,
>
> Thank you for addressing my comments.
> I have an additional comment on your title.
> with this implemented, I sign off.
>
> Title:
> "ψ(2S) production in isobaric collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV with the STAR
> experiment" -> "Measurement of ψ(2S) production in isobar collisions at
> √sNN = 200 GeV by the STAR experiment"
>
>
> Cheers
> Nihar
>
>
>
> On 2023-04-20 23:55, wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn wrote:
> > Hi Nihar,
> >
> > Thank you for the nice comments. This is the new version, please have a
> > look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_poster_v2.pdf
> >
> > (Is there any other effects that you missed to mention here? It sounds
> > like there are other effects other than that listed here; what are
> > those?)
> >
> > for this question, I think the dissociation, regeneration and cold
> > nuclear matter effects are the main effects.
> > the dissociation include static and dynamic dissociation. maybe I only
> > mention the dynamic dissociation in the
> > abstract, I will modify it.
> >
> >
> > best,
> > Yan
> >
> >> -----原始邮件-----
> >> 发件人: "Nihar Sahoo" <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> >> 发送时间: 2023-04-19 20:48:07 (星期三)
> >> 收件人: wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn, "STAR HardProbes PWG"
> >> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> >> 抄送: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> >> 主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Quark Matter
> >> 2023 submitted for review
> >>
> >> Hello Yan,
> >>
> >> Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
> >>
> >> Line1: "…important probe to the properties of the quark-gluon plasma"
> >> ->
> >> "…important to probe the properties of the quark-gluon plasma"
> >> Line4: "…interplay of several effects, including dynamic dissociation
> >> and …"  -> "…interplay of several effects including dynamic
> >> dissociation
> >> and …"
> >> (Is there any other effects that you missed to mention here? It sounds
> >> like there are other effects other than that listed here; what are
> >> those?)
> >> Line7: "…  that of J/ψ, comparison of the suppression of J/ψ and ψ(2S)
> >> at
> >> RHIC can shed …" -> "…that of J/ψ.  The suppression of J/ψ and ψ(2S)
> >> yield at RHIC can shed light …"
> >> LIne10: "…with 4B isobaric collisions…" -> "… by analyzing around 4
> >> billions isobar collisions data (…)…"
> >>
> >>
> >> Cheers
> >> Nihar
> >>
> >> On 2023-04-18 12:07, wy157543--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> >> > Hi all,
> >> >
> >> > This is my poster abstract.
> >> >
> >> > best,
> >> > Yan
> >> >
> >> >
> >> >> -----原始邮件-----
> >> >> 发件人: "webmaster--- via Star-hp-l" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> >> >> 发送时间: 2023-04-18 13:57:27 (星期二)
> >> >> 收件人: Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> >> >> 抄送:
> >> >> 主题: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Quark Matter 2023
> >> >> submitted for review
> >> >>
> >> >> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >> >>
> >> >> Yan Wang (wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
> >> >> review,
> >> >> please have a look:
> >> >> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63442
> >> >>
> >> >> Deadline: 2023-05-01
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