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[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Wei,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I have one minor comment for your consideration. 

 L7 - 11: These two sentences now read a bit strange to me. I would suggest to change these to: 

However,  the recombination effect of uncorrelated charm-anticharm (cc ̄) pairs is suggested to be larger at the LHC and the top RHIC energies than that of at lower collision energies, and it complicates the interpretation of  the observed J/ψ suppression in heavy-ion collisions.

  (By the way, probably it will be good to use only "recombination" or "regeneration".)  

It's up to you. I don't have any further comments on it.

Cheers,

Yi

On Mon, Apr 24, 2023 at 8:57 PM 张炜 <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn> wrote:

Hi Barbara,

Thanks for the very nice comments, I uploaded the updated poster abstract to its original location.

Best,

Wei

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From:  "Barbara Trzeciak"<barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>;

Date:  Mon, Apr 24, 2023 08:18 PM

To:  "张炜"<wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>;

Cc:  "yiyang0429 AT gmail.com"<yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>; "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>; "Nihar Sahoo"<nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

 

Hi Wei,

thanks for the update.

I sign off with the following comments addressed: 

- L8: uncorrelated charm-anticharm (c¯c) pairs is -> charm-anticharm (c¯c) pairs that is

- L9: that complicates -> complicates

- L17: are discussed -> is discussed

Cheers,

Barbara

On Mon, Apr 24, 2023 at 9:04 AM 张炜 <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn> wrote:

Hi Nihar,Yi and Barbara,

Thanks very much for your nice comments, please find the updated poster in this link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_poster_weizhang.pdf

Best Wishes,

Wei

 

 

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From:  "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Mon, Apr 24, 2023 04:42 AM

To:  "yiyang0429 AT gmail.com"<yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>; "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

 

Hi Wei,

below are my minor comments to your nice abstract.

- L2: with the STAR detector -> at STAR

- L5: Measurement of -> Measurements of

- L5: plays -> play

- L7: formation.However -> formation. However (missing space)

- L8:  charm-anticharm(cc¯) ->  charm-anticharm (cc¯) (missing space)

- L8-9: is suggested to be larger at LHC and top RHIC energies, which add -> adds

- L10: Meanwhile. the regeneration -> The regeneration

- L14: In this talk -> In this poster

- L15: with the -> collected by the

- L15: The yields -> The invariant yields

- L17: will be discussed -> are discussed 

Cheers,

Barbara

On Sun, Apr 23, 2023 at 1:26 AM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Wei,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract for the poster. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - L7: Missing a space in front of "However"? 

 - L8: Add a space before (ccbar)

 - L9: at LHC --> at the LHC 

 - L14: the J/psi measurements --> the measurements of J/psi 

 - L17: Energy dependence --> Collision energy dependence (or Beam energy dependence) 

Cheers,

Yi

On Wed, Apr 19, 2023 at 8:49 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

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Wei Zhang (wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a review, 
please have a look:
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