STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Wei,

below are my minor comments to your nice abstract.

- L2: with the STAR detector -> at STAR

- L5: Measurement of -> Measurements of

- L5: plays -> play

- L7: formation.However -> formation. However (missing space)

- L8:  charm-anticharm(cc¯) ->  charm-anticharm (cc¯) (missing space)

- L8-9: is suggested to be larger at LHC and top RHIC energies, which add -> adds

- L10: Meanwhile. the regeneration -> The regeneration

- L14: In this talk -> In this poster

- L15: with the -> collected by the

- L15: The yields -> The invariant yields

- L17: will be discussed -> are discussed 

Cheers,

Barbara

On Sun, Apr 23, 2023 at 1:26 AM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Wei,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract for the poster. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - L7: Missing a space in front of "However"? 

 - L8: Add a space before (ccbar)

 - L9: at LHC --> at the LHC 

 - L14: the J/psi measurements --> the measurements of J/psi 

 - L17: Energy dependence --> Collision energy dependence (or Beam energy dependence) 

Cheers,

Yi

On Wed, Apr 19, 2023 at 8:49 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

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Wei Zhang (wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a review, 
please have a look:
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