STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Youqi,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.


L9-10: "Compared to the jets at the LHC, jets produced in … large 
non-perturbative contributions." -> I understand what you want to say 
here. But we need to be careful while mentioning this type of sentence. 
It depends upon what kinematic range and what observables, etc. So it is 
naive to write this sentence. Please either be specific or rephrase this 
sentence.
L10-11: "The jet substructure measurements at STAR therefore offer 
important complementary information to those at the LHC." -> "The jet 
substructure measurements in the STAR experiment, therefore, offer 
important information about different regimes of quantum chromodynamics 
at RHIC energy."
L15: "…observables, including…" -> "  observables including "
L17-19: "We continue our exploration of multi-dimensional jet 
substructure observables, measuring a newly proposed observable, the 
CollinearDrop groomed jet mass, while also utilizing a novel machine 
learning method, MultiFold, to correct for detector effects." -> "We 
measure a newly proposed multi-dimensional jet substructure 
observable—the CollinearDrop groomed jet mass. A novel machine learning 
method, known as Multifold, is used to correct these observables for the 
detector effect."

At the end, you may consider to add one sentence on what MC models you 
want to compare with the data to draw physics conclusion.


Cheers
Nihar




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