STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Jaroslav,

Please find my a few comments on your nice abstract.

_... detector coverage and capabilities in tracking and particle 
identification to study ... -> detector coverage, tracking, and particle 
identification capabilities to study ...
_ ... created in central collisions of heavy ions.  -> created in 
central heavy-ion collisions.
_ ... jet production and their substructure -> jet production, and their 
substructure
_  ... p+Au and heavy-ion collisions -> p+Au, and heavy-ion collisions


With these implemented, I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar


On 2023-06-17 22:13, Bielcik, Jaroslav via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Dear Yi,
>
>  thanks a lot for your comments, I agree to them.
>  Yes I intend to show non-photonic electrons as well.  I have modified
> the abstract according to your suggestions. New version is
>  https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/abstract23_v2.docx
>
>  With best regards Jaro
>
> -------------------------
>
> Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uživatele Yi Yang
> via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Odesláno: sobota 17. června 2023 5:11
> Komu: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>; STAR HardProbes
> PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Jaroslav Bielcik for
> ICNFP 2023 submitted for review
>
> Hi Jarosalv,
>
> Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I have some comments for your
> consideration.
>  - Title: "from the STAR experiment" or "from STAR"
>  - First paragraph: it only mentioned studying the QGP properties, but
> many measurements are motivated by studying the basic QCD properties,
> jet structure, charge, heavy flavor production mechanism. So I would
> suggest adding more motivations here.
>  - Second paragraph: are you going to show the results from heavy
> flavor electron or meson? If not, probably mentioning quarkonia is
> good enough ("measurements of charm and bottom quarks" reads a bit
> strange).
>  -  I think the most recent results from HF are coming from isobar
> (J/psi, Upsilon, D), so it would be good to emphasize it or generalize
> Au+Au to A+A.
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
> On Wed, Jun 14, 2023 at 7:02 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Jaroslav Bielcik (jaroslav.bielcik AT fjfi.cvut.cz) has submitted a
> > material for
> > a review, please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63981
> >
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