STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Isaac,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

_ hadrons called jets. -> hadrons—called jets.  [use em dash or comma]
_To study the dependence of hard partons traveling through the QGP on 
the path length within this … -> To study the path length dependence of 
hard partons traveling through the QGP, … [ dependence on _path lenght_, 
so better to make this syntax]
_event shape engineering -> event-shape-engineering


With these implemented, I sign off.

Best
Nihar



On 2023-06-26 13:03, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Dear Isaac,
>
> Thanks a lot for the updated abstract. I only have one minor comment
> for your consideration.
>   - L8 and L11: remove (A+A) and (p+p)
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
> On Sat, Jun 24, 2023 at 2:15 AM Mooney, Isaac via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hi all,
> >
> > This is the updated abstract and title to focus on my individual
> > analysis for the poster conversion from the rejected pre-merged talk
> > (#262).
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Isaac
> >
> > > On Jun 23, 2023, at 2:09 PM, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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> > >
> > > Isaac Mooney (isaac.mooney AT yale.edu) has submitted a material for
> > a review,
> > > please have a look:
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