STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Isaac,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I don't have any further comments on it

Cheers,

Yi

On Wed, Jun 28, 2023 at 5:32 AM Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu> wrote:

Hi Nihar and Yi,

I implemented your comments (with one small caveat that I changed it to “event-shape engineering” without the second dash, as I think that is more grammatically correct).

Thanks,

Isaac

On Jun 26, 2023, at 4:44 AM, Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Isaac,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

_ hadrons called jets. -> hadrons—called jets.  [use em dash or comma]
_To study the dependence of hard partons traveling through the QGP on the path length within this … -> To study the path length dependence of hard partons traveling through the QGP, … [ dependence on _path lenght_, so better to make this syntax]
_event shape engineering -> event-shape-engineering


With these implemented, I sign off.

Best
Nihar



On 2023-06-26 13:03, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l wrote:

Dear Isaac,
Thanks a lot for the updated abstract. I only have one minor comment
for your consideration.
 - L8 and L11: remove (A+A) and (p+p)
Cheers,
Yi
On Sat, Jun 24, 2023 at 2:15 AM Mooney, Isaac via Star-hp-l
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Hi all,
This is the updated abstract and title to focus on my individual
analysis for the poster conversion from the rejected pre-merged talk
(#262).
Thanks,
Isaac

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