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[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Jaro,

Thanks a lot for implementing my comments. I don't have any further comments on this nice presentation. I also saw that Barbara provided some final comments, please implement them as well, thanks a lot.

Cheers,

Yi

On Sun, Jul 9, 2023 at 11:56 PM Bielcik, Jaroslav via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Nihar and Yi,

thank you very much for careful review of my presentation. I have accepted almost 100% of your suggestions, it improved the content and clarity.

Upon your suggestions I have added J/psi v2 and Upsilon Raa Isobar slides.  I left slide order as it is  and absence of footnote at the bottom of the slide  from practical reasons.

Updated version is:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/JaroBielcik_ICNFP23_v3.pdf

I hope that talk is Ok in this shape, since I will have only limited possibility to make changes tomorrow.

With best regards Jaro

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Hello Jaro,

Please find my comments on your nice slides.
Due to limited time, I am passing it to startalk.
Please reply to us in hp-pwg mailing list.

General: On each slide at the footer, Please add your name/conference
name/
SLide1:
Jaroslav Bielcik for STAR collaboration -> Jaroslav Bielcik for the STAR
collaboration

SLide3:
_"Plan 2023-2025: Au+Au 200 GeV, p+p 200 GeV, p+Au 200 GeV" -> You don't
need here. Drop it. You are discussing this at the end Slide23

_You can just discuss the STAR detector here in general and also new
upgrades

_Forward upgrade: 2.5 < η < 4  Heavy flavor tracker: 2014-2016. -> No
body can see at the bottom, please bring somewhere at the top

Slide5:
Please make sure these BR numbers are correct.

Slide6:
* It is reproduced by models incorporating both radiative and
collisional energy loss  -> "Models incorporating both radiative and
collisional energy loss explain the data"

Slide16:
_well established probe of QGP -> well established hard probe of QGP
_"due to the transport properties of the QGP - jet quenching" -> Not
clear, probably you mean "due to the transport properties of the QGP"
_R_CP RHIC and LHC -> R_CP at RHIC and LHC
_"Recent jet measurements address modifications to the jet structure via
the jet fragmentation functions, jet shapes, jet mass, jet substructure"
-> Recent jet measurements address jet modifications using jet
substructure measurements like —jet like, jet mass, jet shape, etc.

SLide17:
_ …jet energy redistribution -> …lost jet energy redistribution in the
medium
_ …     similar level of suppression -> …similar level of suppression,
within uncertainty


Slide18:
* Separating vacuum shower and in-medium radiation -> This statement is
probably Ok. But exactly we can not separate these radiations in
heavy-ion collisions as both "vacuum + in-medium" radiation present in
AuAu but in pp only "vacuum radiation"; in that sense we can see AuAu
ratio is less than pp. [In case someone ask you question or comment]

Slide20:

Left figure ratio plot (R=0.2) is incorrect. So please drop this figure.
Only keep R=0.5 please.
[We are preparing the paper and will address this.]

Large off-axis jet yield -> Better to phrase as "Excess recoil jet yield
around pi/2"


Cheers
Nihar


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