STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Gabe,

Thanks a lot for the nice proceedings. I only have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - General: all p+p --> $p$+$p$

 - Figure 1: it would be good if it can be moved to page 3

 - L7: LHC results --> the LHC results 

 - L9: Heavy ion collisions--> Heavy-ion collisions 

 - L17, L20: heavy ion --> heavy-ion collisions 

 - L35: define pT^raw first

 - L41: Fig.1 --> Figure 1

 - L51: pT --> I believe you meant pT^const, if so please be specific. 

 - L65: LHC --> the LHC 

 - L86: In p+p --> In $p$+$p$, 

 

Cheers,

Yi

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