STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Veronika,

Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - General: I saw you only mention the results from heavy-flavor electrons (some of them are not that new), I would suggest showing some quarkonium results from isobar data, depending on how much time you have. If you are going to show only the HFE results, then I would suggest changing the title to Recent heavy-flavor electron measurements from STAR.

 - Title page: The picture quality of the top band does not look good... 

 - p4: this is accepted by PLB, please add it in the reference part. 

 - p11: It would be good to add a summary page after this. 

 

Cheers,

Yi

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