STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Nihar,

Thanks a lot for the nice proceedings. I have some comments for your consideration. 

 - Abstract: you are not only mentioning the results from heavy-ion collisions, so it is a bit weird to state "including jets and heavy flavour pro- duction in heavy-ion collisions to study the properties of the quark-gluon plasma.". It should include p+p... 

 - L10 - L13: I don't think investigating QGP is the "only" goal for RHIC, but this sentence reads this way... It would be good to merge L29 - 33 here. 

 (Title 3.1 is "Probing fundamental QCD", so it would be good to add this feature here.)

 - L25: in both heavy-ion collisions and 𝑝+𝑝 collisions. -->  in both heavy-ion and 𝑝+𝑝 collisions.

 - L68: missing a period at the end. 

 - L79: in [5] --> in Ref. [5]. 

 - Figure 1 caption: add p+p collisions at 200 GeV. 

 - L85: add a reference for "can be utilized to map the Lund Plan of parton shower."

 - L88: in [7] --> in Ref. [7]. 

 - L88: both these techniques --> both techniques? 

 - L97: in [8] --> in Ref. [8]. 

 - L102: in [9] --> in Ref. [9]. 

 - L116: add 200 GeV somewhere

 - L127: in [12] --> in Ref. [12]. 

 - Figure 5 caption: add Au+Au at 200 GeV

 - L139: in [14] --> in Ref. [14]. 

 - Figure 6 caption: add p+p and Au+Au at 200 GeV

 - L144: Isobar --> isobar 

 - L151: in [15] --> in Ref. [15]. 

 - L153: Isobar --> isobar 

 - Figure 7 caption: add 200 GeV

 - L156: You clearly talked about both J/psi and Upsilon, so this sentence is a bit strange. You also mainly talked about the results in isobar collisions, so mentioning Au+Au is strange... I would move this sentence or rephrase it.  

 - L158: Isobar --> isobar 

 - L164: Isobar --> isobar 

 - L167: in [16] --> in Ref. [16]

 - Figure 8 caption: add 200 GeV for isobar and Au+Au at 200 GeV for Upsilon. 

 - L200: "zero J/psi v2" is not good, should be something "not significant J/psi v2". 

 - L201: the conclusion doesn't mention Upsilon suppression. 

 

Cheers,

Yi

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