STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Yuan,

Thank you for posting your nice slides.
I have following comments on your slides.

No need to make text as red color for your interest.

Slide 3:
_ "A significant energy loss of charm quarks in isobar collisions?" -> 
sounds like you have already know the conclusion.

   How about combing last two bullets
"What is the charge quark energy loss and binary collision scaling in 
Isobar collisions?"

Slide4:

_ Title: Charm jets tagged with D^0 mesons -> Simply  " D^0 tagged jet 
in heavy-ion collisions"

_ Definition of Z; please check with what Diptanil has used in his 
poster. Use the same notations.

_ "A significant suppression of D0 tagged jet yield with lower D0 
kinematics at RHIC energies? " -> Remove this bullet. Not needed to say 
anything.

_ Make "radial distribution of the D^0" expression a bit bigger and move 
it up so that people can see from distance.

Slide5:
"A diffusion of charm quarks at lower pT in Au+Au collisions at sNN = 
200 GeV?" -> It is not clear where do you get it. I think it is not 
needed. Just go to your results in 15min talk. In QM, people want to see 
the results assuming they are aware of motivation.

_"Contribution from the underlying background is small at RHIC" This is 
not absolutely correct. And not clear what underlying background you are 
talking. So better to remove or rephrase this.

_In this slide important is to highlight the kienematic range of D^0 
that you are going to show: 1 - 10 GeV/c; That you mentioned at the 
bottom that no one will notice. Make it bigger and highlight somewhere 
up.

Slide7:
combination background -> combinatoric background


Slide8:
_Suggestion: Less wording is better. Try to clean it up and make a 
concise phrase or sentence
_ VS -> vs [and elsewhere]


You can bring slide4 and 5 before Slide12, so that you can tell people 
what you are going to tell next.
Make 1-10 GeV/c kinematic slide in bold text on each slides.

Slide12:
I hope you will speak a sentence on "LIDO" comparison .

Cheers
Nihar


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