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["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Jakub,

The poster looks very good at this stage. I have a few very minor comments for your consideration, and I sign off.

Thanks,

Isaac

> Make "TofMult" roman (in STAR and Analysis sections)

> The plot on the right in "Electron selection" looks a bit funny. If you kept the same range as the plot before cuts on the left, I would understand all the white space. But you also zoom in already on the y-axis. How about (-2,4) on the y-axis?

> Could you write out "Crystal Ball" since you have space? I'm not sure how common the acronym is, but it took me a few seconds of puzzlement :).

> I like how you basically include a legend for the plots in the Analysis section -- it's clever. But the "signal" highlight doesn't exactly work because it doesn't explain the 3 CB functions that add to the signal in the cyan-ish color. It's not vital, but would be good to somehow give a visual description for them as well. You have a bit of space on that line, maybe you can come up with something.

> References: You have a few instances of "et al." when it's only a one or two author paper. For the two authors, would be good to write both names since you have some space, and for Ref. 5 just remove et al.

On Aug 28, 2023, at 8:37 PM, Ceska, Jakub via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear all,

I have uploaded a new version (v3) addressing Saskia's comments.

The layout and design will yet be updated.

Best regards,
Jakub

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Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uživatele Ceska, Jakub via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Odesláno: úterý 29. srpna 2023 0:00
Komu: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Kopie: Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] Poster upload fix

 

Dear all,

I have included the newest fits (to be found here: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/ceskajak/Newest-fits-QM23-poster) in the QM23 poster, which you can find under this link:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Measurement-multiplicity-dependence-Upsilon-meson-production-pp-coll

Please let me know if you have any comments, as I would like to send the poster for printing at Thursday.

Thank you for your time.

Best regards,
Jakub

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Od: Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>
Odesláno: pondělí 28. srpna 2023 8:22
Komu: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Kopie: Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] Poster upload fix

 

Hi Jakub,

Don't worry about it. :-)

Cheers,

Yi

On Sun, Aug 27, 2023 at 5:18 PM Ceska, Jakub via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear all,

I deeply apologise for not uploading the QM poster draft for review using the proper submission form, as I was not aware of it and instead sent it over as a blog post.

The mistake has been rectified.

I am sorry for any inconvenience and thank you for your understanding.

Best regards,

Jakub

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