STAR HardProbes PWG

["Ceska, Jakub" <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>]

Dear Yi and all,

a new version (v7, https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Measurement-multiplicity-dependence-Upsilon-meson-production-pp-coll) has been uploaded and has addressed your comments.

Best regards,
Jakub

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Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uživatele Ceska, Jakub via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Odesláno: středa 30. srpna 2023 21:17
Komu: Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>; STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Kopie: Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] Poster upload fix

 

Dear Yi,

thank you for your comments. I apologise they haven't been addressed yet, I am experiencing issues with some messages from the mailing list not being delivered, into which I am looking.

They will be addressed today.

Best,
Jakub

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From: Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>
Sent: Wednesday, August 30, 2023 1:52:44 PM
To: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Cc: Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>
Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] Poster upload fix

Hi Jakub,

Thanks a lot for the updated version (v6). I have some follow-up (same) comments for your consideration. 

  -  Abstract: 

     - Since you don't have the result, I would suggest changing "we present the latest measurements.." to "we present the status of the latest measurements..." . 

 - Analysis: 

     - unlike-sign and like-sign --> unlike-sign (US) and like-sign (LS)    (you use LS later in the combinatorial background part)

     - Do you have any other constraints on the fitting parameters, for example the mass differences between states, widths of each state? If so, please list them. 

Cheers,

Yi

On Wed, Aug 30, 2023 at 12:35 PM Ceska, Jakub via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear all,

I have uploaded a new version (v6, https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Measurement-multiplicity-dependence-Upsilon-meson-production-pp-coll), which includes the changed ranges on the pre-cut nSigmaE plot, as well as design and layout changes.

Thank you for your time.

Best regards,
Jakub

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Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uživatele Ceska, Jakub via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Odesláno: úterý 29. srpna 2023 19:58
Komu: Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>
Kopie: Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>; STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] Poster upload fix

 

Dear Isaac,

thank you for your opinion, I share it. I shall roll it back.

Thank you for your time.

Best,

Jakub

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From: Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>
Sent: Tuesday, August 29, 2023 12:02:47 PM
To: Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>
Cc: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] Poster upload fix

 

Hi Jakub,

Thanks for addressing the comments. I personally think it’s fine to leave the before cuts plot as it was before. People might be confused that it doesn’t look like what they’re used to seeing with the noticeable band structures at higher nsigma_e.

-Isaac

On Aug 29, 2023, at 12:06 PM, Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz> wrote:

Dear Isaac and all,

thank you very mych for your comments, they have been implemented in v4.

I have tried putting both ranges in the nSigmaE plots to -2, 4. I am now unsure, wether to keep the "before cuts" plot as was in v3 (still listed on the page for comparison purposes).

Best regards,
Jakub

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Od: Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>
Odesláno: úterý 29. srpna 2023 5:44
Komu: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Kopie: Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] Poster upload fix

 

Hi Jakub,

The poster looks very good at this stage. I have a few very minor comments for your consideration, and I sign off.

Thanks,

Isaac

> Make "TofMult" roman (in STAR and Analysis sections)

> The plot on the right in "Electron selection" looks a bit funny. If you kept the same range as the plot before cuts on the left, I would understand all the white space. But you also zoom in already on the y-axis. How about (-2,4) on the y-axis?

> Could you write out "Crystal Ball" since you have space? I'm not sure how common the acronym is, but it took me a few seconds of puzzlement :).

> I like how you basically include a legend for the plots in the Analysis section -- it's clever. But the "signal" highlight doesn't exactly work because it doesn't explain the 3 CB functions that add to the signal in the cyan-ish color. It's not vital, but would be good to somehow give a visual description for them as well. You have a bit of space on that line, maybe you can come up with something.

> References: You have a few instances of "et al." when it's only a one or two author paper. For the two authors, would be good to write both names since you have some space, and for Ref. 5 just remove et al.

On Aug 28, 2023, at 8:37 PM, Ceska, Jakub via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear all,

I have uploaded a new version (v3) addressing Saskia's comments.

The layout and design will yet be updated.

Best regards,
Jakub

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Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uživatele Ceska, Jakub via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Odesláno: úterý 29. srpna 2023 0:00
Komu: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Kopie: Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] Poster upload fix

 

Dear all,

I have included the newest fits (to be found here: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/ceskajak/Newest-fits-QM23-poster) in the QM23 poster, which you can find under this link:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Measurement-multiplicity-dependence-Upsilon-meson-production-pp-coll

Please let me know if you have any comments, as I would like to send the poster for printing at Thursday.

Thank you for your time.

Best regards,
Jakub

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Od: Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>
Odesláno: pondělí 28. srpna 2023 8:22
Komu: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Kopie: Ceska, Jakub <jakub.ceska AT fjfi.cvut.cz>
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] Poster upload fix

 

Hi Jakub,

Don't worry about it. :-)

Cheers,

Yi

On Sun, Aug 27, 2023 at 5:18 PM Ceska, Jakub via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear all,

I deeply apologise for not uploading the QM poster draft for review using the proper submission form, as I was not aware of it and instead sent it over as a blog post.

The mistake has been rectified.

I am sorry for any inconvenience and thank you for your understanding.

Best regards,

Jakub

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