STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Dandan,

Sorry for the delayed reply. 

I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - p6: Feed-down also plays a role --> Feed-down contribution also plays a role    (or Feed down also plays a role) 

         b hadron decay --> b-hadron decay 

         is there an extra space in front of "in 200 GeV"? 

 - p7: The box on the right. I understand you quoted directly from the paper, but it will confuse people that "you estimate it" if they don't listen to your talk. I would change it to "theoretical prediction: the J/psi polarization at small pT is xxxx" 

 - p12: consistent --> are consistent 

 - p13: New results is --> New results are 

           consistent --> are consistent 

 - p15: (Lab frame) --> (lab frame)

 - p16: "𝐽/𝜓 𝜌00 < 1/3 at LHC forward rapidity" has different font than others. 

 - p18 - p20: I will comment on the preliminary request. Please change these plots according to the final preliminary results.

 - p21: global spin alignment: merge the first and second bullets 

Cheers,

Yi

On Thu, Sep 21, 2023 at 2:56 PM Dandan via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Nihar, Yi and Isaac

Here are my slides at the SPIN 2023 conference. This is a new version with an improvement.

I would be grateful if you could address it. Because the meeting started on the 25th.

Please find the new version in the link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/spin_Dandan_v0_QianYang_v2.pdf

Thanks again!

Best,

Dandan

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