STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Priyanka,

Please find my comments on your nice presentation slides below.

Slide4:

_"Figure 2: Correlation between unlike…at ALICE" -> Remove it.
_ Can you please mention individually what physics we observed from both 
these two figures? It seems left pi-D plot shows no correlation. Is not 
it? Unlike p-D. Make a point here if that is correct.

Slide5:
_ "Figure 3: …" ->Remove this [Generally in presentation we do not use 
this]
_   Don't use "Fig 3 (a)" "(a)" or (b)" ; better mention what 
correlation you point to
_  "Resonance effect fade out…" -> where do you get this statement? 
Please explain or provide reference.

Slide6,7,8
_"Figure 5?: …" ->Remove it

Slide16:
If you want to discuss sys. Uncertainty here, then mention also %sys 
uncertainty for case-1

Slide17:
_"STAR data shows no correlations, but the data also consistent with 
theoretical models…" -> It sounds like self contradictory. I would 
prefer to say "Due to large uncertainty, STAR data inconclusive to pin 
down the source size"
 Or similar.
_Late bullet -> not sure if we need it here.


Best
Nihar



On 2023-10-31 04:01, Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Dear convenors,
>
>  I am not sure if my previous email was received, therefore, to avoid
> confusion, I am sharing the link of my updated version of the slides
> here once again.
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/WPCF_Priyanka_V3.pdf
> I made the changes after a discussion with local STAR group at WUT and
> I have removed previous version.
>
> Regards,
> Priyanka
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