STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Tanmay,

Thanks a lot for the proceedings. 

Could you please provide the draft with the line number so it will be easier to comment?

In the meantime, please find my comments below: 

 - Abstract: 

   - In this talk --> In this contribution  

   - I would remove "(jets constructed using ... background)", I think it is too much information for abstract

- Introduction: 

   - Any references for the generalized jet angularities definition? If so, please add them. 

   - pT, jet: it should be the jet's transverse momentum or the total jet's transverse momentum 

- Analysis details: 

  - Like you mentioned in the summary, it is the first time using multifold in heavy-ion collisions, could you please add more about it here? 

- Result and Discussion --> Results and Discussions 

   - Please add more details about the systematics, you only mentioned "various sources".

Cheers,

Yi

     

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