STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Dandan,

Thank you so much for the nice proceedings. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - Abstract: The abstract is a bit too long to me, but it is up to you. 

 - L7: quark-gluon plasma --> Quark-Gluon Plasma (to be consistent with L10) 

 - L7: In this talk, we will present --> In this proceedings, we present 

 - L17: proton-proton --> proton+proton (p+p)

 - L18: polarization parameters --> polarization values  (better?)

 - L19 - L23: I would slightly modify it to "However, experimental measurements are more complex due to the feed-down contribution, which accounts for about 40% of the observed 𝐽/𝜓 yield, and it can have an impact on the polarization of 𝐽/𝜓 meson [1]. Up to date, no significant polarization for inclusive 𝐽/𝜓 has been observed in p+p collisions at sqrt(𝑠NN) = 200 GeV [4]."  Again, it is up to you.

             * It would be great to mention the p+p and Pb+Pb results from LHC. 

 - L24: One the one hand --> On the one hand, 

 - L26: phi(2S) --> Psi(2S)   (the symbol is wrong)

 - L28: RHIC-STAR --> the STAR

 - L28: phi(2S) --> Psi(2S)   (the symbol is wrong)

 - L35-37: I would remove "Consequently, ... studying the QGP." and move "The coalesced J/psi ... and lower collisions energy" to there. So the new paragraph will start with "Measuring the J/psi spin..."

 - L48: You use "("polarization")" after lambda_theta, are you trying to say that only lambda_theta refers to polarization? I actually would remove it.  

 - Eq. 2: missed a period at the end. 

 - L89: Mix-event --> mix-event   (do you need "M" in capital?) 

 - L113: It would be good to mention that this method is already used in the published result and add the reference. 

 - L131: remove "as a function of the transverse momentum"

 - L135: "The values of lambad_inv... " seems to be a bit repeated, since all three are consistent zero, but I know why you want to put it here. :-)

 - L136: pp --> p+p

 - Figure 2 Caption: 10GeV/c --> 10 GeV/c

 - Figure 3 Caption: 200GeV --> 200 GeV

 - L139: Figure 3 --> Fig. 3

 - L139: LambdaTheta --> Lambda_theta

 - L144: Figure 4 --> Fig. 4

Cheers,

Yi

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