STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Monika,

Nice proceedings.

Please find a few comments below. With these implemented I sign off.

L9: first, second and third -> first, second, and third
L28: two adjustable parameters -> two parameters [we do not adjust to 
match anything rather we set these parameters]
L34: during the initial split and tracking the evolution … -> during the 
initial split, and tracking the evolution
 [or observables: I) examining… splitting, and II) tracking…]
L40: for the finite instrumental resolution. -> the data for the 
detector inefficiency and the finite instrumental resolution.
L44: in jet transverse momentum, pT,jet -> in pT,jet. [already defined]
L50: various pT,jet bins at R = 0.4. -> Please mention in this sentence 
or another sentence that pT,jet are corrected or uncorrected?
L53: relatively small. -> negligible.
L62: vs. split number and Rg -> vs. split number, and Rg
L64: vs. pT,jet and subsequently -> vs. pT,jet, and subsequently …

Best
Nihar


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