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[Yi Yang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>]

Hi Andrew,

Thanks a lot for the nice results and paper draft/analysis note. I think it is good to move forward. 

I have some minor comments/suggestions for your consideration while we are forming the GPC. 

 - General: I don't think you need the titles of each section, like "I. Introduction", "II. Experimental Methods", since you are submitting to PRL. But I did see some paper having this, so it is up to you. 

 - L69: it is a bit strange to refer to Eq.1 which is away from this text. Why don't you define it here? 

 - L74: ii)) --> ii) 

 - L115: the two-point energy correlator (EEC) --> the EEC

 - L133: Particle ID --> Particle identification 

 - Figure 1: not sure if you want to put it this big... 

 - L370: the 2-point energy correlator --> the 2-point energy correlator (EEC)   (I think it is okay to reemphasize EEC is 2 point energy correlator)  

 -  References: probably need to be careful of some style things, like the issue number will be bold. 

Cheers,

Yi

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On Tue, Mar 12, 2024 at 5:04 AM Andrew Tamis via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello All,

Ahead of my presentation at the STAR collaboration meeting next week to request GPC formation for my paper measuring EECs in Run 12 pp data at sqrt(s) = 200GeV, I am sending my updated paper proposal page, which now includes an analysis note and paper draft.  Please let me know if you have any comments.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/atamis/Paper-Proposal-Measurment-Two-Point-Energy-Correlators-pp-Collisions-Sqrts-200-GeV

Best,

Andrew

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Andrew Tamis

Yale University

Graduate School of Arts and Sciences

Department of Physics

andrew.tamis AT yale.edu

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