STAR HardProbes PWG

[Andrew Tamis <andrew.tamis AT yale.edu>]

Hello Yi,

Thank you very much for the comments, sorry for the delay.

I elected to keep the section titles for now, but this is subject to change with others' opinions during the GPC. I also moved equation 1 and made figure 1 smaller, along with the grammatical changes as written.  Lastly, I went through and reformatted the references, so hopefully they should be more consistent and in the correct format, with bold issue number.

Best,

Andrew

On Mon, Apr 15, 2024 at 11:27 PM Yi Yang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw> wrote:

Hi Andrew,

Thanks a lot for the nice results and paper draft/analysis note. I think it is good to move forward. 

I have some minor comments/suggestions for your consideration while we are forming the GPC. 

 - General: I don't think you need the titles of each section, like "I. Introduction", "II. Experimental Methods", since you are submitting to PRL. But I did see some paper having this, so it is up to you. 

 - L69: it is a bit strange to refer to Eq.1 which is away from this text. Why don't you define it here? 

 - L74: ii)) --> ii) 

 - L115: the two-point energy correlator (EEC) --> the EEC

 - L133: Particle ID --> Particle identification 

 - Figure 1: not sure if you want to put it this big... 

 - L370: the 2-point energy correlator --> the 2-point energy correlator (EEC)   (I think it is okay to reemphasize EEC is 2 point energy correlator)  

 -  References: probably need to be careful of some style things, like the issue number will be bold. 

Cheers,

Yi

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On Tue, Mar 12, 2024 at 5:04 AM Andrew Tamis via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello All,

Ahead of my presentation at the STAR collaboration meeting next week to request GPC formation for my paper measuring EECs in Run 12 pp data at sqrt(s) = 200GeV, I am sending my updated paper proposal page, which now includes an analysis note and paper draft.  Please let me know if you have any comments.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/atamis/Paper-Proposal-Measurment-Two-Point-Energy-Correlators-pp-Collisions-Sqrts-200-GeV

Best,

Andrew

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Yale University

Graduate School of Arts and Sciences

Department of Physics

andrew.tamis AT yale.edu

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