STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello ~ Neil,

Thank you for your nice abstract.

Please find a few comments below.

_ You need to include your affiliation
L1_ "there has been a notable evolution in jet measurements " -> "there 
is significant development and advancement in jet measurement."
L5_ "interplay of different energy scales during jet evolution." -> 
Probably, you mean here "…to understand the two regimes of Quantum 
Chromodynamics (QCD), like perturbative to non-perturbative QCD, in jet 
evolution.  ["energy scale" in jet evolution is not clear; so need to 
make it clear]
L7_ …the transition of the jet between the partonic and the hadronic 
phases… -> the transition between the parton shower to hadronization in 
jet evolution using correlation measurement…. ["the transition of the 
jet between" not a proper syntax]
L14_ "…techniques employed within STAR’s robust jet physics program. " 
-> "…techniques employed in STAR."
L15: These results … until 2025 -> This sentence needs some work.

Best
Nihar


On 2024-04-29 10:40, Diptanil Roy via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Dear conveners,
>
> Please find my abstract below for the STAR contribution to BOOST 2024.
> Let me know if you have any comments or questions on the same.
>
> Thank you.
>
> ~ Neil
>
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