STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Diptanil,

Thank you for implementing suggestions that I pointed out.
Your abstract looks good to me.
I sign off.

Best
Nihar


On 2024-05-06 11:08, Diptanil Roy wrote:
> Hi Nihar, thank you for your comments. Please find v1 below with these
> implemented.
>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/BOOST_2024_v1_Diptanil.pdf
>
> On Sun, May 5, 2024 at 8:03 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> wrote:
>
> > Hello ~ Neil,
> >
> > Thank you for your nice abstract.
> >
> > Please find a few comments below.
> >
> > _ You need to include your affiliation
> > L1_ "there has been a notable evolution in jet measurements " ->
> > "there
> > is significant development and advancement in jet measurement."
> > L5_ "interplay of different energy scales during jet evolution." ->
> > Probably, you mean here "…to understand the two regimes of Quantum
> >
> > Chromodynamics (QCD), like perturbative to non-perturbative QCD, in
> > jet
> > evolution.  ["energy scale" in jet evolution is not clear; so need
> > to
> > make it clear]
> > L7_ …the transition of the jet between the partonic and the
> > hadronic
> > phases… -> the transition between the parton shower to
> > hadronization in
> > jet evolution using correlation measurement…. ["the transition of
> > the
> > jet between" not a proper syntax]
> > L14_ "…techniques employed within STAR’s robust jet physics
> > program. "
> > -> "…techniques employed in STAR."
> > L15: These results … until 2025 -> This sentence needs some work.
> >
> > Best
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2024-04-29 10:40, Diptanil Roy via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Dear conveners,
> > >
> > > Please find my abstract below for the STAR contribution to BOOST
> > 2024.
> > > Let me know if you have any comments or questions on the same.
> > >
> > > Thank you.
> > >
> > > ~ Neil
> > >
> > > On Mon, Apr 29, 2024 at 10:37 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
> > > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > >
> > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > >
> > > > Diptanil Roy (roydiptanil AT gmail.com) has submitted a material for
> > a
> > > > review,
> > > > please have a look:
> > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/67643
> > > >
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>
> ~ Neil