STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Ondrej,

This is a very nice set of slides. I have only a few minor comments, below. 
With these addressed, I sign off.

Enjoy the conference,
Isaac

6. It's a bit misleading to show the plot on the right here and then mention 
"medium response depends on the mass of the underlying parton" since the 
effect here is really a color factor effect rather than a mass effect. Since 
you're talking on this slide about medium modification and showing the CMS 
measurement in PbPb, why not show the STAR AuAu results instead? You can 
still make the claim at the bottom that there is a mass dependence, maybe 
with a citation to a theory paper for example.

13. I think you have a copy-paste error in the first bullet -> remove 
"collisional and radiative energy losses"

15. Since the legends/labels here are identical in the plots, you can spread 
them out across the two so you save space and can make them larger as 
currently they're difficult to read. E.g. the "STAR run 14..." labels can be 
on the left, while the centrality legend can be on the right.


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