STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Veronika,

Thanks a lot for the very nice poster and sorry for the late response. 

I have two comments/suggestions for your consideration. 

  - I think the main goal for you is to measure the RCP or RAA of HFE, but you don't mention it in the main content (only in the abstract). I would suggest to add a formula of RAA or RCP before Eq.1 to show this is the main physics goal and Eq.1 will be one of the important ingredients of your analysis. 

  - The font size for the figure captions can be smaller. 

Cheers,

Yi

On Wed, May 29, 2024 at 10:52 PM Mooney, Isaac via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Veronika,

This looks great. Thanks for addressing the comments. I sign off.

Enjoy the conference,

Isaac

On May 29, 2024, at 05:29, Veronika Prozorova <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Isaac,

Thank you very much for your comments. Please, find them implemented in the new version here https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/PosterSQM24_ver2.pdf

Best regards,

Veronika

вт, 28 мая 2024 г. в 22:56, Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>:

Hi Veronika,

The poster looks very good. One small comment is that it’s not made explicitly clear what is already done and what is still left to be done. Maybe you could highlight the components of eq. 1 in one color for “done” (e.g. N^incl, N^PE, etc.) and another for “work in progress” (e.g. N^HDE). On this point, the last sentence of the poster is not very useful: “New results…coming soon”. This could be removed to make space to explain what you actually need to do to make the finalized results. Last bullet could be: “Finalize corrections for ___ -> final evaluation of N_HFE and physics implications for heavy parton energy loss” or similar.

Thanks,

Isaac

On May 26, 2024, at 08:26, Veronika Prozorova via Star-hp-l <Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear convenors,

Please, let me know if you have any comments on my poster for the upcoming SQM24 conference.

Best regards,

Veronika 

пн, 20 мая 2024 г. в 13:54, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>:

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https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/67850

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