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[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Veronika,

Thanks a lot for the updated version (v4). It looks very nice to me, please delete the older version. 

Cheers,

Yi

On Fri, May 31, 2024 at 4:09 PM Veronika Prozorova <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com> wrote:

Dear convenors,

I just realized that I forgot to include the star-hp mail list in my last email to Yi. Sorry for that.

The latest version of the poster can be found here  https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/PosterSQM24_ver4.pdf

I have added the QR code for the https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations as I think it will be easier for people to scan it than to type the link.

Best regards,

Veronika

пт, 31 мая 2024 г. в 03:10, Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>:

Hi Veronika,

Thanks a lot for implementing my suggestions. It looks great and I am totally fine with having the Rcp after Eq.1. 

I don't have any further comments on it.

Cheers,

Yi

On Thu, May 30, 2024 at 6:43 PM Veronika Prozorova <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Yi,

Thank you very much for your comments. I decided to place the Rcp formula at the end of the HFE section because inserting it before Eq.1 (in the middle of the HFE description) seemed strange and a bit illogical to me.

Please, take a look at the new version here https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/PosterSQM24_ver3.pdf and let me know if you have any further comments.

Best regards,

Veronika

ср, 29 мая 2024 г. в 17:41, Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>:

Hi Veronika,

Thanks a lot for the very nice poster and sorry for the late response. 

I have two comments/suggestions for your consideration. 

  - I think the main goal for you is to measure the RCP or RAA of HFE, but you don't mention it in the main content (only in the abstract). I would suggest to add a formula of RAA or RCP before Eq.1 to show this is the main physics goal and Eq.1 will be one of the important ingredients of your analysis. 

  - The font size for the figure captions can be smaller. 

Cheers,

Yi

On Wed, May 29, 2024 at 10:52 PM Mooney, Isaac via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Veronika,

This looks great. Thanks for addressing the comments. I sign off.

Enjoy the conference,

Isaac

On May 29, 2024, at 05:29, Veronika Prozorova <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Isaac,

Thank you very much for your comments. Please, find them implemented in the new version here https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/PosterSQM24_ver2.pdf

Best regards,

Veronika

вт, 28 мая 2024 г. в 22:56, Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>:

Hi Veronika,

The poster looks very good. One small comment is that it’s not made explicitly clear what is already done and what is still left to be done. Maybe you could highlight the components of eq. 1 in one color for “done” (e.g. N^incl, N^PE, etc.) and another for “work in progress” (e.g. N^HDE). On this point, the last sentence of the poster is not very useful: “New results…coming soon”. This could be removed to make space to explain what you actually need to do to make the finalized results. Last bullet could be: “Finalize corrections for ___ -> final evaluation of N_HFE and physics implications for heavy parton energy loss” or similar.

Thanks,

Isaac

On May 26, 2024, at 08:26, Veronika Prozorova via Star-hp-l <Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear convenors,

Please, let me know if you have any comments on my poster for the upcoming SQM24 conference.

Best regards,

Veronika 

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