STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Veronika,

Sorry for the delay while I was on vacation for the US holiday. Thanks for preparing these proceedings. Please see below for some small comments (mostly just typos). With these addressed, I sign off. In the interest of time, I’ll push it to STAR-talks, but please address any comments Nihar sends as well.

Thanks,

Isaac

30. "Langevin", "dynamics"

33. "interaction"

34. "which are the dominant contribution to the HFE signal at low pT" or something like that.

36. "observations"

41. "di-electron R_pAu" -> "J/psi R_pAu measured through the di-electron channel" or similar.

43. "suppression at low pT..." is in reference to the muon-channel results, yes? So it should go after the sentence "The results are also compared to..."

47. It might also be nice to mention that the muon and electron results are seen to be consistent.

52. "Fig. 3"

On Jul 8, 2024, at 17:05, Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Veronika,

Very nice proceedings! 

Sorry for the late reply. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - L6: I would use "Zr+Zr and Ru+Ru (isobar)" 

 - L9: R_AA --> nuclear modification factor (R_AA)

 - L13: cold nuclear matter --> cold nuclear matter (CNM)

 - L12: pT --> transverse momentum (pT)

 - L26: nuclear modification factor, R_AA, --> R_AA

 - L40: Cold Nuclear Matter (CNM) --> CNM

 - L52: Fig. 4 --> Fig. 3

 

Cheers,

Yi

On Thu, Jul 4, 2024 at 9:55 PM Veronika Prozorova <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com> wrote:

Dear convenors,

This is a kind reminder about my proceedings that was submitted last week.

Thank you.

Best regards,
Veronika

пт, 28 июн. 2024 г., 10:54 Veronika Prozorova <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com>:

Dear Convenors,

I have submitted the proceedings for the DIS conference. As a reminder, the submission deadline to the PoS is the 15th of July. I would appreciate receiving your comments within the next week.

Thank you.

Best regards,
Veronika

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