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["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Priyanka,

I only have a few small comments on your talk (below), and sign off.

Thanks,

Isaac

9. 1.6 < D0 mass < 2.2 GeV/c^2

11. 

Slide title and second bullet: "correlation"

Is there a reason the k* doesn't get a vector symbol on the LHS of eqs. 5 and 6?

General: from slide 11 onward, the talk gets very text-heavy. One example of a place you can trim would be s. 11 where I don’t think the “D0-hadron pair-purity correction is…” bullet is necessary, and instead you can just have an arrow from “D0 purity” in green above to the value: “~37%…”, and similar with arrows from hadron purity to the values for K, pi, and p. Please go through and think about places you can trim/remove (e.g. you can use sentence fragments instead of full sentences; you don’t need the first bullet on s. 12 because all of that information is in the figure just above; etc., etc.)

On Jul 8, 2024, at 17:09, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Priyanka,

Thanks a lot for the prompt reply. 

Yes, I would suggest removing "Figure X" and keeping the caption if you want. 

Cheers,

Yi

On Tue, Jul 9, 2024 at 5:07 AM Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) <priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl> wrote:

Hi Yi,

Thanks for your feedback. We will address your comments soon. I have a small question and comment.

1. Do you suggest writing the figure captions without mentioning the figure no.?
2. You are correct, we don't have any prediction for D0-p pair yet, so we will make it clear and will also add the purity plots in backup.

Regards,

Priyanka

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Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury for ICHEP 2024 got commented by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury

 

Hi Priyanka,

Thanks a lot for the nice talk. Please find my comments below:

 - p5: Figure 4 --> Figure 5  and all numbers of Figure are wrong afterward (I actually would suggest to remove all "Figure X" in the slides )

 - p14: I would add "Theoretical predictions are needed."

 - p15: The second bullet is only valid for D-pi and D-k since you don't have any prediction for D-p for now, right? 

 - I would suggest that you add the purity plots in the backup.

Cheers,

Yi

On Sat, Jul 6, 2024 at 6:17 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Priyanka Roy Chowdhury ( priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl ) has 
commented on a material originally submitted by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury ( 
priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICHEP-2024/Measurement-heavy-flavour-femtoscopy-using-D0-mesons-and-charged-hadrons-Au

Comment:
Hi all, this talk has been uploaded on behalf of Katarzyna (speaker on behalf 
of me). Apologize for the previous emails with non-accessible links.

Regards,
Priyanka

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