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["Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT)" <priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl>]

Hi Yi and all,

Thanks for your suggestions. We have updated the plots in S12 and S14. Please find the updated version here.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICHEP-2024/Measurement-heavy-flavour-femtoscopy-using-D0-mesons-and-charged-hadrons-Au

I have also prepared PID plots from my own analysis result as Nihar asked for and attached those plots at the same place for review. If you suggest replacing published plots with my own plots in S8, Kasia will do that tonight or maybe tomorrow as she is travelling today. If there are no more comments to address, we would like to request to push it to the STAR talks.

Regards,

Priyanka

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Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury for ICHEP 2024 got commented by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury

 

Hi Priyanka and Katarzyna,

Sorry for one last minor suggestion: it would be better if you can put the legends of 2 fm and 5 fm in the same order (now they are in the same color, but not the same order). 

Cheers,

Yi

On Tue, Jul 16, 2024 at 11:59 PM Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) <priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl> wrote:

Hi Yi,

Thanks for your suggestion. We already implemented it in the new version as I mentioned in another email.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/ICHEP2024_talk_Gwizdziel_v3.pdf

After discussion, we are keeping the conclusion same. Please let us know if you have any further comments.

Regards,

Priyanka

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Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury for ICHEP 2024 got commented by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury

 

Hi Priyankan, Katarzyna,

Thanks a lot for the updated slides. I have two minor comments: 

 - p12 and 13: I just noticed that the colors for predictions (2 fm and 5 fm) are not consistent. Can you change them to be the same? For example, 2 fm in green and 5 fm in pink for both plots. Also change the text. 

 Also, can you use the same style for these two plots, like the legends for D0/D0-pi and -K, also the font sizes for collision information are different. 

 - Regarding the conclusion, I am thinking if it will be better to state that the results disfavor the small radius < 2 fm prediction? It is up to you.

Cheers,

Yi

On Sat, Jul 13, 2024 at 7:10 AM Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) <priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl> wrote:

Hi Isaac, Yi, Nihar and all,

Please find the updated version of here.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/ICHEP2024_talk_Gwizdziel_v2.pdf

Katarzyna has implemented all comments and suggestions. Please let me know if you have any further comments and questions.

Regards,

Priyanka

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Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury for ICHEP 2024 got commented by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury

 

Hi Priyanka,

I only have a few small comments on your talk (below), and sign off.

Thanks,

Isaac

9. 1.6 < D0 mass < 2.2 GeV/c^2

11. 

Slide title and second bullet: "correlation"

Is there a reason the k* doesn't get a vector symbol on the LHS of eqs. 5 and 6?

General: from slide 11 onward, the talk gets very text-heavy. One example of a place you can trim would be s. 11 where I don’t think the “D0-hadron pair-purity correction is…” bullet is necessary, and instead you can just have an arrow from “D0 purity” in green above to the value: “~37%…”, and similar with arrows from hadron purity to the values for K, pi, and p. Please go through and think about places you can trim/remove (e.g. you can use sentence fragments instead of full sentences; you don’t need the first bullet on s. 12 because all of that information is in the figure just above; etc., etc.)

On Jul 8, 2024, at 17:09, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Priyanka,

Thanks a lot for the prompt reply. 

Yes, I would suggest removing "Figure X" and keeping the caption if you want. 

Cheers,

Yi

On Tue, Jul 9, 2024 at 5:07 AM Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) <priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl> wrote:

Hi Yi,

Thanks for your feedback. We will address your comments soon. I have a small question and comment.

1. Do you suggest writing the figure captions without mentioning the figure no.?
2. You are correct, we don't have any prediction for D0-p pair yet, so we will make it clear and will also add the purity plots in backup.

Regards,

Priyanka

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Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury for ICHEP 2024 got commented by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury

 

Hi Priyanka,

Thanks a lot for the nice talk. Please find my comments below:

 - p5: Figure 4 --> Figure 5  and all numbers of Figure are wrong afterward (I actually would suggest to remove all "Figure X" in the slides )

 - p14: I would add "Theoretical predictions are needed."

 - p15: The second bullet is only valid for D-pi and D-k since you don't have any prediction for D-p for now, right? 

 - I would suggest that you add the purity plots in the backup.

Cheers,

Yi

On Sat, Jul 6, 2024 at 6:17 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Priyanka Roy Chowdhury ( priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl ) has 
commented on a material originally submitted by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury ( 
priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICHEP-2024/Measurement-heavy-flavour-femtoscopy-using-D0-mesons-and-charged-hadrons-Au

Comment:
Hi all, this talk has been uploaded on behalf of Katarzyna (speaker on behalf 
of me). Apologize for the previous emails with non-accessible links.

Regards,
Priyanka

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