STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Priyanka and Katarzyna,

Please find my comments on your nice proceedings.
I sign off with these implemented.


Abstract:
We will report the measurement of femtoscopic -> We report the 
measurement of femtoscopic
We will compare -> We compare

\sqrt{ s_{NN}} ->  \sqrt{ s_{\rm NN}} all places

L82: …by various unwanted effects. -> Rephrase this wordings. Mention 
what are those.
L83: …alleviated the effects of the TPC detector, -> Mention what are 
those effects.


In Eq.3 -> use “PairPurity” as {\rm PairPurity}
measured -> \rm measured

DK, Dp, Dpi… -> Please use “-“ in between like D-k pairs, etc… [all 
places]



Best
Nihar

On 2024-09-20 08:34, Yi Yang wrote:
> Hi Katarzyna and Priyanka,
>
> Thanks a lot for the nice proceedings. I have some minor comments for
> your consideration.
>  - Abstract: D0 mesons are reconstructed via the K-pi+ ... --> D0
> (D0^bar) mesons ... via the K-pi+(K+pi-)...
>  - L3: probably you don't need "(LHC)"
>  - L7: they are produced very early ... --> they are produced before
> the QGP formation   (up to you)
>  - L71: It would be nice mentioning the fit function here as well (you
> only mentioned it in the figure caption).
>  - Figure 1 caption: do you miss a space between "pT" and "ranges" in
> the first line?
>  - L78: please add the reference for Eq. 2.
>  - L82: "unwanted effects" sounds new to me, I would remove
> "unwanted".
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> Yi Yang, Research Fellow
> Institute of Physics, Academia Sinica
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> -----Original message-----
> From:Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT)<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> To:star-hp-l<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Date: Wed, 18 Sep 2024 07:43:49
> Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy
> Chowdhury for ICHEP 2024 submitted for review
>
>  Hi Yi,
>
>  Thanks for confirming. Take your time, thanks again.
>
>  Regards,
>  Priyanka
>
> -------------------------
>
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> Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy
> Chowdhury for ICHEP 2024 submitted for review
>
> Hi Priyanka,
>
> Yes, thanks! I can see it now. I will provide my comments later (once
> I finished all the HP results).
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> Yi Yang, Research Fellow
> Institute of Physics, Academia Sinica
> E-Mail: yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw
> Tel: +886-2-2789-6709
> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> -----Original message-----
> From:Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT)<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> To:star-hp-l<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Date: Wed, 18 Sep 2024 07:31:52
> Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy
> Chowdhury for ICHEP 2024 submitted for review
>  Hi Yi,
>
>  Could you please double check if you could access the proceeding in
> Drupal now? I can see it here.
>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICHEP-2024/First-measurement-heavy-flavour-femtoscopy-using-D0-mesons-and-charged-ha-2
>
>
>  Regards,
>  Priyanka
>
> -------------------------
>
> From: star-hp-l-request AT lists.bnl.gov
> <star-hp-l-request AT lists.bnl.gov> on behalf of Yi Yang
> <yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw>
> Sent: Wednesday, September 18, 2024 1:28 AM
> To: star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy
> Chowdhury for ICHEP 2024 submitted for review
>
> Hi Priyanka,
>
> I think you still need to upload the proceedings to the drupal
> officially, so we can officially push to star-talk later.
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> Yi Yang, Research Fellow
> Institute of Physics, Academia Sinica
> E-Mail: yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw
> Tel: +886-2-2789-6709
> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> -----Original message-----
> From:Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT)<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> To:Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov<Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Date: Tue, 17 Sep 2024 09:03:19
> Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy
> Chowdhury for ICHEP 2024 submitted for review
>  Dear Convenors and all,
>
>  I am trying to submit the proceeding for ICHEP on behalf of my
> colleague Katarzyna who covered my talk and prepared the proceeding.
> Unfortunately, couple of times attempts got failed and in the current
> node, the document is inaccessible to me. I am requesting the
> convenors to kindly help me to solve this issue. The document is
> attached here for your reference.
>
>  Regards,
>  Priyanka
>
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>
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> Subject: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury
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>
> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>
> Priyanka Roy Chowdhury (priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl) has
> submitted
> a material for a review, please have a look:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/68950
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