STAR HardProbes PWG

["张炜" <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>]

Hi Rongrong,

Thank you for the very nice comments, I applied them and updated the slides：https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/68894

 

Best，

Wei

 

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From:  "Ma, Rongrong"<marr AT bnl.gov>;

Date:  Fri, Sep 20, 2024 05:02 AM

To:  "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for HP2024 submitted for review

 

Hello Wei

Very nice slides. I have some comments for your consideration:

Slide 2

- The first bullet can be simplified "Quarkonia suppression was proposed as a sensitive probe to QGP properties"

Slide 3

- Make the right figure smaller. It looks a bit overwhelming.

- Highlight "Collision energy", "pT and centrality" and "Binding energy", and increase their size.

Slide 4

- momentum -> Momentum

- particle -> Particle (two places)

Slide 5

- Change the title "Energy Dependence: BES-I -> BES-II"

Slide 9

- Change the title "Binding Energy Dependence in Isobar Collisions"

Slide 12

- Reverse the two bullets

Slide 15

- For the last two bullets, use arrows in front of them instead of dots, which make it look like sub-bullets.

Best

Rongrong

On Sep 19, 2024, at 12:10 PM, 张炜 <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn> wrote:

Dear conveners,

I implemented your suggestions, as well as changed some detail in motivation part, and I uploaded a new version of the slides: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/68894

For the STAR published R_AA, I'll mention that in the energy dependency diagram on page three at this slides.

For Isobar collisions statistics plot are from QM2023 by Yan Wang's talk.

Best,

Wei

 

 

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From:  "tc88qy"<tc88qy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Fri, Sep 13, 2024 03:48 PM

To:  "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for HP2024 submitted for review

 

Hi Wei

  Very nice slides. I have few comments and suggestions for your
consideration.
1)page 4, with iTPC upgrades the TPC acceptance has been extend to
|eta|<1.5
2)page 5, you may talk about STAR published RAA first, then talk about
the physics opportunity
from BES-II data. The red box on the RAA plot is confusion. If you want
to emphasize the energy, you may highlight the energy on x axis.
3)swapping  page 4 and page 5.
4)page 6, remove regeneration dominates at LHC energies.
5)Page 9, Isobar collisions statistics needs to be consistent within
collaboration.
6)Page 12&13, the title should be different from page 11, it is a double
ratio plots.

Qian Yang

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