STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Wei,

I don't have any comments. I sign off.
I am going to pass it to startalk.

Thank you
Nihar

On 2024-09-20 12:43, Yi Yang wrote:
> Hi Wei,
>
> Thanks a lot for the updated version. I don't have any comments on it.
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
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> Yi Yang, Research Fellow
> Institute of Physics, Academia Sinica
> E-Mail: yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw
> Tel: +886-2-2789-6709
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> -----Original message-----
> From:张炜<wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>
> To:STAR HardProbes PWG<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Date: Fri, 20 Sep 2024 15:10:47
> Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for HP2024
> submitted for review
> Hi Yi,
>
> Thanks for the great suggestion, I applied them and uploaded a new
> version of slides: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/68894
>
> Best，
> Wei
>
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>
> From:  "Yi Yang"<yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw>;
> Date:  Fri, Sep 20, 2024 09:20 AM
> To:  "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
>
> Subject:  Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for HP2024
> submitted for review
>
> Hi Wei,
>
> Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I have some minor suggestions for
> your consideration.
>  - p.2: I would highlight "Hot medium effects", "Cold nuclear matter
> effects", and "Others" rather than the "Dissociation (xxx)".
>  - p.3: The right plot is a bit repeated since you have an updated
> plot in p.6, if the reason is to show the previous results, I would
> suggest also showing the previous pT and centrality and other states
> results, and make them smaller. But it's up to you.
>  - p.4: momentum --> Momentum
>            particle --> Particle
>  - p.9: I remember we have a plot including the Au+Au results, you can
> consider to use that one since it will show the improvement by using
> isobar data.
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> Yi Yang, Research Fellow
> Institute of Physics, Academia Sinica
> E-Mail: yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw
> Tel: +886-2-2789-6709
> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> -----Original message-----
> From:张炜<wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>
> To:star-hp-l<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Date: Fri, 20 Sep 2024 00:10:17
> Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for HP2024
> submitted for review
> Dear conveners,
>
> I implemented your suggestions, as well as changed some detail in
> motivation part, and I uploaded a new version of the slides:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/68894
>
> For the STAR published R_AA, I'll mention that in the energy
> dependency diagram on page three at this slides.
> For Isobar collisions statistics plot are from QM2023 by Yan Wang's
> talk.
>
> Best,
> Wei
>
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>
> From:  "tc88qy"<tc88qy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>;
> Date:  Fri, Sep 13, 2024 03:48 PM
> To:  "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
>
> Subject:  Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for HP2024
> submitted for review
>
> Hi Wei
>
>   Very nice slides. I have few comments and suggestions for your
> consideration.
> 1)page 4, with iTPC upgrades the TPC acceptance has been extend to
> |eta|<1.5
> 2)page 5, you may talk about STAR published RAA first, then talk about
>
> the physics opportunity
> from BES-II data. The red box on the RAA plot is confusion. If you
> want
> to emphasize the energy, you may highlight the energy on x axis.
> 3)swapping  page 4 and page 5.
> 4)page 6, remove regeneration dominates at LHC energies.
> 5)Page 9, Isobar collisions statistics needs to be consistent within
> collaboration.
> 6)Page 12&13, the title should be different from page 11, it is a
> double
> ratio plots.
>
> Qian Yang
>
> On 2024-09-11 20:48, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:
> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Wei Zhang (wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
> review,
> > please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/68894
> >
> > Deadline: 2024-09-22
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