STAR HardProbes PWG

["张炜" <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>]

Hi Yi,

Thanks for the great suggestion, I applied them and uploaded a new version of slides: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/68894

Best，

Wei

 

 

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From:  "Yi Yang"<yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw>;

Date:  Fri, Sep 20, 2024 09:20 AM

To:  "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for HP2024 submitted for review

 

Hi Wei,

Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I have some minor suggestions for your consideration.

 - p.2: I would highlight "Hot medium effects", "Cold nuclear matter effects", and "Others" rather than the "Dissociation (xxx)".

 - p.3: The right plot is a bit repeated since you have an updated plot in p.6, if the reason is to show the previous results, I would suggest also showing the previous pT and centrality and other states results, and make them smaller. But it's up to you.

 - p.4: momentum --> Momentum

           particle --> Particle

 - p.9: I remember we have a plot including the Au+Au results, you can consider to use that one since it will show the improvement by using isobar data.

 

Cheers,

Yi

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From:张炜<wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>
To:star-hp-l<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Date: Fri, 20 Sep 2024 00:10:17
Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for HP2024 submitted for review

Dear conveners,

I implemented your suggestions, as well as changed some detail in motivation part, and I uploaded a new version of the slides: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/68894

For the STAR published R_AA, I'll mention that in the energy dependency diagram on page three at this slides.

For Isobar collisions statistics plot are from QM2023 by Yan Wang's talk.

Best,

Wei

 

 

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From:  "tc88qy"<tc88qy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Fri, Sep 13, 2024 03:48 PM

To:  "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for HP2024 submitted for review

 

Hi Wei

  Very nice slides. I have few comments and suggestions for your
consideration.
1)page 4, with iTPC upgrades the TPC acceptance has been extend to
|eta|<1.5
2)page 5, you may talk about STAR published RAA first, then talk about
the physics opportunity
from BES-II data. The red box on the RAA plot is confusion. If you want
to emphasize the energy, you may highlight the energy on x axis.
3)swapping  page 4 and page 5.
4)page 6, remove regeneration dominates at LHC energies.
5)Page 9, Isobar collisions statistics needs to be consistent within
collaboration.
6)Page 12&13, the title should be different from page 11, it is a double
ratio plots.

Qian Yang

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